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雅思写作中那些失败的开头

2015-07-06 15:10:51 | 编辑: 小棉袄 | 有486人参与 | 来自: 环球教育整理

俗话说“好的开端是成功的一半”,好的雅思写作开头可以为你的文章增色不少,但是如果你的雅思作文开头不仅不出色,而且还犯下大错误,这样不仅会影响考官对你的印象,也会影响到你的雅思作文分数。今天就跟大家分享的就是雅思写作错误开头的整理,希望对大家的复习有所帮助。

雅思写作失败开头一:晦涩不明

1-Should college students be allowed to get married?

This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……

修改方案:开门见山 直奔主题

In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married。 Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information? (雅思真题)

Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life. Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really very very important!

雅思写作失败开头二:中式英文人见人晕

典型失败案例:Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……

Topic 2- The population problem The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.

Topic 3- Is there fairness in today’s business world? I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things……

雅思写作失败开头三:观点模糊态度暧昧

典型失败案例: Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married? I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……

希望雅思写作考生们吸取经验,不要犯以上错误,考试顺利!

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