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雅思写作审题中常被忽略的细节:对象限定词

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  今天我们重庆雅思培训学校要给大家分享的是雅思写作审题中常被忽略的细节:对象限定词。大家注意,很多雅思作文可不是写给全人类的。实际上会限定你的写作对象,于是你的观点和说理必须要围着这个被给出的对象进行说理。

  举个例子,之前雅思考过女性为什么会犯罪。同学们有写媒体影响大的,有写工作太忙的,有写没有受过良好教育的,想要分数高,请务必盯着女性。正确观点应该是“女性在社会上容易受到歧视,所以找不到好的工作养活自己,于是可能要去犯罪来满足自己的基本需求。”或者“女性比较情绪化,一些小事就会记仇,所以容易犯罪。”这样的观点才能保证你的作文能点题。大家懂了吗?先想一下对象的特征有哪些,然后再把观点往上去联系,这样才有高分!

  如果你已经有所领悟了,请再看五个例子巩固一下,相信大家以后看到对象限定词肯定就不会再吃亏了!

  例1:

  Some scientists believe there are intelligent life forms that may exist on other planets and we should send messages into the outer space. Others say that it may be too dangerous for people on the earth. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

  偏题观点:

  It is very difficult to communicate with alien beings who could be very primitive.

  题中信息:

  intelligent life forms:文中的外星生物必须有智慧,不会太原始。

  正确观点:

  It is very difficult to communicate with alien beings who have different language and cultural background, so misunderstandings may occur.

  例2:

  Some people believe that the country would benefit a lot from a large number of young people entering into university; however, others think that the large amount of people receiving the education of university only leads to graduates unemployment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

  偏题观点:

  Universities graduates can get a well-paid job in the future.

  题中信息:

  the country would benefit a lot:必须写政府作为受益者。

  正确观点:

  Universities graduates can get a well-paid job in the future, which means that the country will be equipped with a workforce of higher quality.

  例3:

  Some people think that women should play an equal role as men in military force, others say women are not suited for such kind of work. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

  偏题观点:

  All people have the responsibility to serve the country.

  题中信息:

  Women:观点必须要突出女性的特征,而不是一概而论。

  正确观点:

  Women are more patient than men, so many jobs in military force like doctors or spies are more suitable for them.

  例4:

  Young people are leaving their homes from rural areas to study or work in the cities. What are the reasons? Do its advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

  偏题观点:

  Young people are inexperienced, so studying or working inthe cities can help them broaden the horizons.

  题中信息:

  from rural areas:这道题目的观点必须突出农村青年的特点。

  正确观点:

  Without advanced economy and education, young people from rural areas have fewer opportunities to know the world, so studying or working in the cities can help them broaden the horizons.

  例5:

  In some countries, the parents expect children to spend long time in studying both in and after school and have less free time. Do you think it has positive or negative effects on the society that they live in?

  偏题观点:

  Heavy study load and great expectation from parents may give children too much pressure.

  题中信息:

  on the society they live in:观点必须要写对于社会的影响。

  正确观点:

  Heavy study load and great expectation from parents may give children too much pressure, then some children might skip schools as they take no interest in the classes they are obliged to attend and could develop bad habits or even reduce to juvenile delinquents.

  大家都理解这个套路的特点了吧,问谁你就要答谁,写作文之前,先要考虑题目当中的对象有什么特征,然后再联系自己的观点,绝对不能东拉西扯,不然你的词汇语法再怎么完善,也可以和6.5以上的高分说再见了!

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